August 23rd, 2012 at 04:07am
Anna's Beginning - Comments
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Such a good story! Please update fairly soon!July 26th, 2012 at 12:52am
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This is going good. And Bruce having a daughter- i can actually see that. So are you going to do all three movie's. So is she going to be John Blake's love interest in Dark Knight Rises? Can't wait to read more. Update soon :)July 20th, 2012 at 11:24pm
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I thought I had commented on this before
anyways I really REALLY like this story and I'm looking forward to the sequel!! 
June 18th, 2012 at 01:11am -
This is really well written! I love the idea of Bruce having a daughter, especially if he was never around. You have a really solid plot line, it seems too. I stumbled across this story by accident, actually, and I’m very glad I did! You’ve got a lot of talent and I hope you continue to use it! The way you ended this chapter was really makes you wonder and keeps you on the edge of your seat. Will the sequel pick right up where Anna’s Beginning leaves off? Will her mom make an appearance? So many questions that need answering! I guess we’ll all just have to wait and see what happens, huh? You’re doing really great on this and I can’t wait for more! The title really insinuates that she’ll have her bad-a** moment, at least that’s what I hope! I can’t wait for what’s next, update soon please!
~Bex xoxoxo
June 11th, 2012 at 12:25am
You're writing is very good and you certainly have a developing talent for it. Your plot is very intriguing and makes sense, which is always a good thing. Watch out for a few spelling errors, otherwise there isn't much to fix. Keep writing!