I’m here as the new judge for the ‘10 Ways To…’ contest.
One of my favorite things about this is how you write about varying degrees of love in a handful of different situations. From the cheating to the “loser” of the school to the fling, you wrote about so many different types of love blossoming out of so many different situations. All your characters were different in personality, as well. I didn’t feel like “oh, well [this character] sounds a lot like [this character] from two chapters back” — you differentiated with all of your characters in a really well-rounded kind of way, even the fan fiction ones.
I think my favorite chapter was four though. There was character development both separately and together between Nathan and Plum. Your writing style really complements all of the stories, as well.
One of my favorite things about this is how you write about varying degrees of love in a handful of different situations. From the cheating to the “loser” of the school to the fling, you wrote about so many different types of love blossoming out of so many different situations. All your characters were different in personality, as well. I didn’t feel like “oh, well [this character] sounds a lot like [this character] from two chapters back” — you differentiated with all of your characters in a really well-rounded kind of way, even the fan fiction ones.
I think my favorite chapter was four though. There was character development both separately and together between Nathan and Plum. Your writing style really complements all of the stories, as well.
Good job!