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  • BlackheartDahlia

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    I know i know friends has told me this about 100 times V_V but you have to think this is my first ever story and stuff . Yeah i know that my Grammer sucks balls but then you have to think if you was in Ashley's shoes and just hang around alot of guys so that why there is alot of cussing ANNNNNNNNNNNND i update like around in the AM alot and im tired as fuck as well when i do my updates ANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNND [ LOL ] I type really fast . Sorry for making this long !
    June 11th, 2012 at 12:54am
  • something different

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    The plot and storyline are very good, but it would be a lot more enjoyable and easier to read if the grammer and spelling were fixed.
    June 10th, 2012 at 01:51pm
  • BlackheartDahlia

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    Thank you ! !!!!!!!!!
    Josh's POV is coming up really soon !!!! :)
    January 14th, 2012 at 01:17am
  • FictionisTrue12

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    i like it; it makes me smile....he he he he he he he.... okay now my face hurts....but anyway keep going it's funny and really cute :)
    January 13th, 2012 at 06:49am
  • BlackheartDahlia

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    Same here ^^^ Who knows what will happen next ! ;)
    January 13th, 2012 at 06:27am
  • babygurl94512

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    maybe n im just glad her dad welcomes her with open arms ahhhhhhhh!!!
    January 10th, 2012 at 08:28am
  • BlackheartDahlia

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    ^^^^^ Im with you BUT !!!!!!!!!!! WHo knows i may kill her off SOON ;)
    January 9th, 2012 at 10:31am
  • babygurl94512

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    her mom is insane n really needs to take a chill pill
    January 9th, 2012 at 09:48am
  • babygurl94512

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    They r sooooooooooo funny
    Can't wait to read more
    Plz write more plz plz plz plz plz plz PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    January 8th, 2012 at 09:07am
  • SycoScene

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    Oh come on plz write more pretty please and read my stories
    January 8th, 2012 at 07:54am
  • SycoScene

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    I love it you should keep going hurry I'm waiting
    January 7th, 2012 at 10:35am
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