October 27th, 2012 at 06:55am
This story is really good. The entire idea of it is genius and there were hardly (if any) grammar mistakes.
If I had any complaint, it would be that Adam's feelings are a little rushed - maybe you should give it a little more time for them to develop for Skye.
Thank you so much! That means a lot. I try to watch how I use my grammar and punctuation.
I completely agree with you. Thank you for your honesty. It is much appreciated.