To Much Too Ache Over - Comments

I like this story a lot so far. Please update it soon.:)

Comment Swap: I don't really think you want crit from someone who doesn't understand the fanbase you're writing about but I can say that the first thing I noticed that you can call grammatically incorrect is the title, To Much Too Ache Over should be Too Much To Ache Over. Unless of course there's some meaning to that, but yeah. You have a good ammount of comments, so your story is obviously popular and the text itself is easy to read. So keep up the good work.

Hmmm on Chapter 2, and its going well indeed. though I thought the sex scene was rushed, but there we go I am just a dirty whore who likes Sex scenes XD haha well I do like it, so I'll keep reading it, And I will probably really enjoy it. (instinct!!!) XD Well done!! :) hope you continue, And I hope that your back like the status says gets much much much much better soon!!! Love C.P xxxxx

PAGE MOTHERFUCKING CLAIM!

I am so sorry I haven't commented. I've been really busy and I just got back on mibba. OH MY GOD NO AIDEN NO NO NO. Now I have reason to hate Michelle even more in this story. God, she's such a bitch. I love this so much!

awh hell not her

........AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!
They said they loved each other. I am teared up with happy tears, man, happy tears.

I hope you get your inspiration back, I really like this.
HE ENDED IT WITH MICHELLE.... YESH!

I love this story & i hope u get your inspiration back too

AGREE^^^^^

This is a really good story!!!!! I hope you get your inspiration back for this story!!!!

Really sad chapter but I'm glad he ended it with Michelle!!!

NO, THE BABY!!!!

o.m.g. whats wrong?!?!?!

oh good lord she's preggers....waht will he do next?

BRIAN, Y U SO STUPID?! I mean, make her feel like it's all her fault, way to go man, way to go

assface. why is he so stupid!!!!!!!! but i guess if he wasnt there really wouldnt be a good story here.......sooo update soon i cant wait to see what happens!!

Addy and Brian are just building up a wall of lies that are going to be knocked over eventually. Shit's gonna go down and everyone's going to be mad at each other. I love it! Gah, update soon

brian's an idiot. why cant she just fall for jimmy or someone single!? lol anyway love the story cant wait to read more

i love this story :)

it getting better!