Dear Jack - Comments

hey, this sounds good!
why don't you update?

update soon,
it sounds ok so far

Hey, i couldnt find the comment box thingy on your page. But thank you for the comment. I like andy warhols work to. I like the colours and oddness. I liked the story by the way, thinking of contuing it?

Sounds good. I love it when I find a story that has proper grammar, etc... I know I sound like an old stuffy English teacher, but I appreciate proper writing.

More?