Blind Fate - Comments

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I'll admit outright that this story isn't really my cup of tea. It's well-written and everything; I just can't make myself get into it. That said, I actually really liked Lycoris' name, and I can definitely sympathize with all of her friends starting to get married. Your writing style is great, and your choice in layout is impeccable. Good job.

Hello, another comment swapper here! :) Honestly, the story itself was pretty good, I actually found myself getting more into that I figured I would. The only criticism I have is the name. I just can't make myself like the more "out there" names. Yes, I know everyone has their own opinion regarding it, I personally don't go for it. Other than that, it is a good plot, great writing and I really liked the layout. Good job!

Got here from comment swap.

In all honesty, this is not the type of story I would normally read. But I'll admit that I really ended up liking it!
You have a good strong plot here. One thing I would say is that you have drama straight away, so it fells slightly rushed, in my opinion anyway.
All in all though, I think you've written this very well and I'd like to see more.

@ Cali_cookies
Thank you for the comment! There's nothing I can say without spoilers for the next chapter :)

Poor girl, I hope she gives him a chance to explain. She just stood up to her aunt for him.

@ Shiznit
Thank you very much! Honesty is always appreciated--and I'm sorry you got stuck reading something you normally wouldn't. Thank you again for the compliments!!

~Comment Swap~

So I have to admit, this is not the type of story I usually read, but I do like your writing style. This definitely has a good plot to it, and I know that people who read stories like this would love it to pieces. I don't think I saw any spelling or grammar errors, which is always a great plus in a story on Mibba. I also really liked your layout. I wish you the best of luck with this. (:

@ xXrawr_cookiesxX
Again, thank you so much!! (Sorry you got both of my stories for the comment swap!) There's a quote from Kurt Vonnegut when he was asked what advice he gives to writers and one point that always stuck with me is to never write more than you need to, so I'm glad it works that I jumped straight into the drama! Thank you again!!

*Comment Swap*
I love this story! It is written amazingly beautiful. I really hope to read more. I like how you automatically jump right into the drama! It is a very lovely story! You write very well. You are a great writer and I hope you continue to write! Can't wait to read more.

@ Cali_cookies
Gah, I'm glad to finally update! Sorry it's been so darn long!

Glad to see you update

@pretty-eyed sarcasm
Honey!
Thanks for the cliff hanger because that was the icing on the cake and that forced me to to click the SUBSCRIBE button! This story is JUICY!
First, the name Lycoris is such an original name! And it has a bit of 'sexy' to it. It just rolls of the tongue!
Anyway, your really good with describing. I could easily picture where Ly was and how she looked as your descriptions were short but thorough. The dialogue was very relaxing and easy to read. I literally saw no errors and therefore I wasn't distracted at all in my reading. The story kept me engaged and I totally felt Ly's annoyance at Hayden's call.
But again, the thing I really like about this story is the fact that I can actually PICTURE whats going on. This story is a breath of fresh air considering the duds I've been reading on Wattpad. Thank you VERY MUCH for sharing!

Chanda Bynum

@ pretty-eyed sarcasm
I struggle with the details, too. I really do. xD But no problem at all. I hope to see more updates soon! :D

@ TabbyKitty13
Thank you so much for the feedback! I do have trouble deciding where more description is needed, because there are a lot of stories that tell you what a room looks like and what the books on the shelf are and every single article of clothing in the closet because the author thinks it's fun to decide those things and often times I find myself bored with the lists and useless descriptions. Thank you so much for that particular bit of feedback--I'll pay more attention to where it might actually make things more interesting!
Haha, I'm so glad you love Jake! He's such a sweet character, he's hard not to love.
Again, thank you, thank you!! I appreciate that so much!!

So, at first, I was a little iffy. It took me until about the second chapter until I was interested, but after that, I couldn't stop reading. I love your characters, and your writing style really draws me in.

I too struggle greatly with this, but I think more description could've been very instrumental in not only making your chapters longer, but painting a picture in the reader's mind. I would like to know what Jake's apartment looks like, not that it was just clean.

Honestly, though....I think I'm in love with Jake. xD And I believe as the story progresses and we really get a better look, I'll love it even more.

I'm subscribed, recommending, and I really can't wait for more!

@ pretty-eyed sarcasm
No prob

@ Cali_cookies
I hope so too! Thank you for keeping up with the story, it means so much to me.

I hope she believes him

Comment Swap send this to me and once I read the summary I was totally hooked! I was like :O this seems like a story that's going to have it all, love, hate, conflict lots and lots of drama, but hey that's what a good story is all about right?

I love the main character's name, super super unqiue and unique characters always make a story that much better!

So I just finished reading the first chapter and I must say, I really enjoyed it. I liked how you made her wear red lipstick even though she hated it. I thought those little touches pushed the chapter over the edge and it was a really great first chapter.

Can't wait to read more!

Got this from comment swap, I'm half way through and I have to say I like it even though I'm not a big fan of originals. I like how you made the chapters a good length, not too long or short and you have a great deal amount of description which some writers lack. I love it so far and I can't wait to read more :)