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  • Josie.

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    I like the idea of your story, and as a fellow hockey fan, I know how hard they are to write sometimes. However, I found it hard to get into the story because I'm so picky on writing styles. I think if the story had more details and didn't use I so much, that it would be better and more enjoyable for me.
    July 4th, 2012 at 07:23am
  • leolion1234

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    I really enjoy reading this story and I'm happy that there's going to be a sequel!
    May 22nd, 2012 at 04:23am
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    Can't wait for the sequel!
    May 22nd, 2012 at 03:00am
  • Star Angel

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    well i happy that you are making a sequal you make me happy lol
    May 22nd, 2012 at 01:11am
  • leolion1234

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    I really like this story, so update soon!
    May 10th, 2012 at 06:09am
  • bmm1024

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    this is so good!!!!! keep up the good work :)
    May 8th, 2012 at 06:29am
  • van Riemsdyk

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    update soon!
    April 22nd, 2012 at 04:04am
  • austinatbest

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    Who are you thinking looks best in the playoffs?? My money's on Philly right now, which isn't pleasing.
    Boston doesn't look good, and I've been at the games. Vancouver looks awful. Apologies.
    Anywho, good updates, and it sucks that mibba deleted stuff.
    April 18th, 2012 at 10:28am
  • van Riemsdyk

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    loved this update! looks like milan has his eye on caroline
    April 5th, 2012 at 03:37am
  • ray8788

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    he's so intersted in her..hope seguin acts fast
    update soon !
    April 5th, 2012 at 03:27am
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    Milan has a crush!
    April 5th, 2012 at 03:24am
  • Big.City.Dreams

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    Oh no! I smell drama coming because he definitely is interested. Guys don't just go watch your sports practices if they don't like you. It just doesn't happen. Update soon?
    April 5th, 2012 at 02:56am
  • hockeychick37

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    as much as i love looch, he cant get in the way of their relationship...UPDATE SOON!!!
    April 5th, 2012 at 02:11am
  • Star Angel

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    more more more please and thank you
    April 4th, 2012 at 07:46am
  • van Riemsdyk

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    loved this update! i'm so happy they are becoming closer
    April 3rd, 2012 at 09:54pm
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    I love that they're getting close. And I'd love it if she overhears the boys making fun of him for still being in the 'friend zone' :)
    April 3rd, 2012 at 09:33pm
  • Big.City.Dreams

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    I liked this chapter! I like that she is sort of integrating herself into his life. And I like that he doesn't seem to mind. I bet his boys are giving him a hard time about just being friends with her and not making a move. Lol. I could so imagine that. Update soon? And just to let you know, the chapter was posted twice?
    April 3rd, 2012 at 08:33pm
  • Dead..

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    Marchand was hilarious :) Loved the update!
    March 29th, 2012 at 09:15pm
  • Star Angel

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    aw update soon please
    March 28th, 2012 at 10:26pm
  • van Riemsdyk

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    this was a great update! i love marchand!
    March 28th, 2012 at 10:10pm
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