Every Man I Fall For - Comments

This is really beautiful, and I loved every moment of it. Thank you so much for sharing this story with us! <3

It's.... Over?! Crying. When's the next one start?

All my love, a little too late.

That cleared up a lot. It's a complete package now.

Oliver is just beautiful, and he's perfect, and I love him. And they're together for four years. Lord. AH. It's so perfect I want to cry. Like all my tears. You can have them. Here.

Anyway. I'll be watching until the next one comes around. Not in a creepy way. I mean....

JUST KEEP DOING WHAT YOU'RE DOING PLEASE!

Welp, that was so sweet :') I'm glad it had a happy ending!

Olive, Thommie, I love them.

Is this really goodbye?

They're happy so I'm happy.

BUT I NEED THEM TO KNOW I LOVE THEM AND I THANK YOU FOR THEIR EXISTENCE, AND THE EXPERIENCE AND...

I'm just shit at goodbyes.

Aww this is just beautiful c: they are so perfect together and I hate to see this amazing story end. But all things come to end so....it was a magnificent story you are a brilliant writer too!! c:

That was such a lovely chapter, and i'm so glad the chapter ended so sweetly like that. :')
I'll be sad when this is over.

And a Happy New Year this is :)

So beautiful this is!!! Happppy New Year! This is really good c: I can't wait for the next update. This is written so well. Gosh!

makes my tummy flop around like a Russian gymnast

“And sometimes you say these things that make my heart go da-dum, da-dum.”

I'M JUST IN LOVE WITH IT ALL. IN LOVE. CAN I GET MARRIED TO IT?

This is just utterly gorgeous. You are such a brilliant writer! Every word you write is breath-taking and works together to create a beautiful purpose. Bravo!

Exquisite. This needs to be a novel right now. I want to be able to hold it and trace the words and turn the pages.

Oliver adj. wispy, intangible.

That is beautiful. The whole thing is beautiful. Tom has come around again! What are you doing to me?

But what happened I don't understand :( my poor olive bear <3

I am going to punch Thom soon, that is all.

This is so amazing but I am so confused!

Why is Thom so angry?! I don't understand! The angst is really working for me right now, also. Update soon?!

(OH LORD, OLIVE)

Oh my! This story is so good! And so in depth! Gosh I love it. I am sad that Oliver and Thom aren't doing too well but I just can't wait for the next update! :) so good!

why are you ruining them?!

Because now that I’d had this revelation that yes, yes, Thom’s fingers fit just with mine, I wanted them there for a long, long time.

That's so cute and then Thom... It's so sad and I just want Oliver to be happy BUT IT HURTS SO WELL.

I kind of want to hate you because they were so perfect and now you've got Thom doing– who knows what he's doing or thinking, he's doing something anyway and I like them way too much and I like Oli way too much and I just want things to work out. But then you just write so fantastically and it's so lovely to read that I can't hate you, so i'll just hate Thom until (if) things get better.
I like how Oli's feelings are really sharp and heavy about Thom, it's both nice and also saddening but anyway, perfect as always.