Every Man I Fall For - Comments

Vivid Dreams would be a good title too. I love the update, makes me all giddy inside XD

Because I want to watch the sun go down in your eyes.

LORD YOU MAKE ME ACHE.

Pineapple socks. <3.

Yes, yes, yes, yes! Such a lovely update. I think Oliver and Thom work so well together, they compliment each other nicely. I also love how they talk to one another, it's just generally lovely, and it kind of shows how they understand each other.
Also the last line, hehe.

Just, you have a wonderful writing style, that's what i'm trying to say and I really appreciate it.

This story is absolutely fantastic! Holy shit.
I don't even know what to say other than that.

You're writing is seriously beautiful. Pure poetry.

I really like this so far. The way you write shows that you are a very intelligent person

np, its true! aweee poor oliver! i wanna hug him and cuddle.

<3

Wohooo this is really interesting and special! I'm really excited for more <3 I love Oli's character the most (I hope he doesn't mind me using his nickname :P) you describe the situations really well and just make the chapters enjoyable naturally. All in all I LOVE IT.

your language is beautiful! really gets me thinking. excited to see where this goes.

Man every time there is a catchy title you know the story's Gunna be great. By the way this story is going to be so cute. Hopefully you will get more views! :)