You Light up My World - Comments

  • axelaaa

    axelaaa (100)

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    i absolutely loved this and thought it was adorable! i really think you should turn this into a full blown story, i think it would be a very cute concept c: great job!
    March 4th, 2012 at 07:29pm
  • swell

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    So I read this yesterday but didn't have time to comment on it until now.
    The thing I loved about reading this was when I was watching TV later that night I was actually thinking about your story and how cute it was. I don't usually think about stories after I read it but I liked that yours was memorable.
    The pacing was good and the interaction between Harry and Ana was really cute.
    January 11th, 2012 at 05:02am