I love this story, but I found something that's been bothering me. I'm not sure if anyone's brought this to your attention yet, but tradition story grammer concludes that for each person that speaks there should be a different paragraph. So like... -makes up random thing-
"Yeah, it's nice to meet you." Bob shook the girl's hand.
She smiled. "It's a pleasure, I'm sure."
Jessica's friend sighed, rolling her eyes at this odd turn of events. "Who knew?" She stated, allowing her statement to turn into a question near the end. This had become strange to her. "Got get a room!"
Both Bob and Jessica cringed, peering at the other girl.
That's what it's normally like... But besides that, I really love this story!
Oh dear lord a Kardashian ref. we're all going to die xDD No but I like this c: She's finally told her mom and now she's gonna tell her dad. wewt :D Can't wait for next mondayy!!!