I like this ending so much better. I mean seriously, Jon was a dbag for the good majority of this story and viktor wasn't. I am so team viktor that i'm glad you'll be writing a story for him because he deserves it so much.
I'm not gonna lie, I wanted Jon to win but I actually preferred this ending. You just gotta love it when the good guy wins in the end. I still stand by Jon though, if only because I believe that is what she truly wanted.
okay so when i read the story i was going back and forth between viktor and jon. and then reading this made me realize i do want her with jon. but the ending to this ("she can come up anytime she wants") was pretty kick-ass. you're definitely one of my favorite writers on this site!