Haha second comment :) I obviously like where this is going because ive already read them... Before anyone else did XD Ahh the perks of being your best friend XD Anyways keep it up xx
Hey there ^^, i've read both chapters so far, and you did a great job making the two girls real (Hope and Faith) The aunt and Bez are developing and I think you you can make them deep as you go along ^^ Keep up the good work