First Snow - Comments

This was extremely adorable and I agree with the commenter who said that it was refreshing to see a strong female character. I think there's a total of 2 All Time Low songs that I know and I enjoy. And I don't know a thing about the names of the members or what they look like lol. So my judgement of band members reaction and characters in ATL is probably mediocre at best but I personally found it to be great. :] It confused me a bit. MOstly due to not knowing much about the characters but that aside, great job! SUUUUUPPPPPPERRR CUTE! hah. k. Im done now. :p lol. good job though forreal. xoxoxo

I thought this was so cute! I really admired Lennox as a character, and it was really refreshing to read a strong female main character that doesn't just throw herself at every guy she encounters. I thought that, aside from a few places that were a bit awkwardly worded, this piece flowed very effortlessly, and I was grateful that it wasn't an exhausting read.

Though I am aware of who All Time Low is, I can't say that I'm incredibly familiar with the fandom, and because of that, I found myself wishing that there was a little more description of the fandom characters because I wasn't able to visualize them in my head.

Overall, I really enjoyed reading this piece :)

Lennox is just so adorable and Alex. Damn, alex mah boy. Hahaha. Well, one thing's for sure, you really did a great job making the whole story. When she danced, well, it was creepy that the boys were watching her. It was like, holeh shit. stalker much? Haha. But great job. :3

I enjoyed that. It was nicely written and very sweet. Despite her intial introverted personality I could definitely read some mischief and all over awareness of the situation. I sort of felt as if she planned the entire thing at the end (though I realize she couldn't have known he would stand there. Still, something about her.) Anyway, I liked seeing Alex as apprehensive instead of the typical cockiness. It was a really nice change and a very realistic look at the beginning of a relationship.

I love your writing style with this story. It's sophisticated and clear and it just paints the plot the whole way through.
I love mistletoe moments! I think they're just so adorable. And you could tell Alex and Lennox were feeling some tension before that so that was like the best thing that could happen to them at that moment - and with their friends being around, that just made it all the more awkward! :D
I absolutely loved the last line - about it being the first snow and how it was a beautiful moment for her and she just fell in love within that time. Loved it!

Oooh, I really liked this. :)