I miss this story :/ I love male eating disorder stories (obviously) and you guys have started this one fantastically. I have high hopes for it once it gets started back up again. :)
Alright well.. Just naturally, whether I hate or love a story, I have to comment on it. I love this by the way. Like.. A lot. Ya'll should update and make my day. c:
I like this a lot! I hope you keep it up. You're really pinpointing their voices in a believable way. Also, it's nice to see a co-write with a flow that's this wonderful.
You should make characters, so we get an idea of how they look. :)
So far, I really like it- especially Aaron's voice. The first chapter was really visual, and I felt really terrified for the character. Update soon please :)
The thoughts that were running through Jared's head made me shudder. I've had those thoughts, those horrible horrible thoughts, and you've gotten them so perfectly. You're doing a great job and it's only the first chapter, I can't wait to read the rest of this story.