Wow. That's all I can say really -wow. I love the way you decided to write this story, as if you're actually telling a story instead of it rather being in any one person's point of view. It's also a pretty awesome way to start out too! I like all of the gore and thought that was put into how Kendall went about taking her revenge, and how one moment she seems sane, and then she just snaps. That was really good. I can't wait to see where this is going, honestly. I always love a good story like this! I just kind of love stories where there isn't a happily ever after at the end and the "bad-guy" walks away ^_^ anyway, keep writing! 
June 21st, 2013 at 06:35pm