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harleathornton (100)

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I really like this story i hope u keep writing more.

November 5th, 2013 at 05:49pm

Mrs.HarryStyles1D_TW (100)

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@ Iwrite27
honestly i think u could have found a better way to as someone to read your story but sure i will read your story even if u didnt read mine...sry its tech week im pissed off at life

March 18th, 2013 at 06:50pm

IwriteYouFeel (100)

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please read my story? thanks! http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/509087/Best-Thing-I-Never-Had/ ? please?

March 18th, 2013 at 02:41pm

jennypenny246 (100)

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I LOVE this story. I really hope you continue writing it. It's soo good. I really hope Harry and Sarah get back together. Well, if she doesn't die. Anyway, please keep writing!

November 27th, 2012 at 02:20am

blutsteinbattery. (100)

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It's a decent story, but it's so erroneous that all the mistakes draw away from the story. I think this write has tons of potential though if you go back and edit it. :)

November 23rd, 2012 at 03:09am

SweetDaydreams21 (100)

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I am here from comment swap, and I've just been hoping to get a One Direction fanfiction! I really love this so far, it only feeds my 1D addiction, haha. They layout is simple yet attractive, your grammar and punctuation is pretty good, and everything flows nicely. Well done!

July 6th, 2012 at 02:43am

ashleyliz_x (100)

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Harry and Sarah are too adorable!! Please post more soon! and what does caitlin want now -__-

March 29th, 2012 at 07:55pm

KonnerQuiseng (100)

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Omg I love it keep writing!

March 20th, 2012 at 01:00am

jeffskinner (100)

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KEEP heh.. sorry

March 17th, 2012 at 03:15am

jeffskinner (100)

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OMG! KEPP GOING!

March 17th, 2012 at 03:15am

KonnerQuiseng (100)

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Agh so intense!

March 14th, 2012 at 08:07am

KonnerQuiseng (100)

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Next chapter please! Haha I love your story!

March 8th, 2012 at 04:34am

umbrellainthesun (100)

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Nice chapter! The harry & sarah moments were to sweet :] but omg a stalker crazy chick named Caitlin!? Lol never a good thing xD

February 21st, 2012 at 04:55am

umbrellainthesun (100)

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Ooooooo (: Haha I really do love this Larissa character xD Lol thanks again for putting me in the story. Great update :D

February 10th, 2012 at 04:59am

umbrellainthesun (100)

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Loving the story! (: Just wanted to let you Niall has two l's in his name... it's Niall not Nial . Though i only noticed this in the 1st chapter so it's all good. I like the way this is going. Sarah's a lucky girl lol :] Because all of 1D likes her for one. & two she gets to see them shirtless. Damn (; haha subscribing now x

January 30th, 2012 at 04:51am

orca1318 (100)

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lovin the one direction. :)

January 20th, 2012 at 10:47pm

lidun (100)

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I like your story :) looking forward to the next chapter

January 20th, 2012 at 03:37pm