The War - Comments

I don't really like the summary because it doesn't give me any insight into the story. It doesn't intrigue me at all. But I did like the content and the characters came alive quite well in my mind. There was a lot of shouting, and it actually kind of gave me a small headache. You do have punctuation issues, and I don't know why you're aware of them yet you don't do anything to fix them. But the content was good and I suppose punctuation is easily fixed.

I really like the content of this, and the plot, but what threw me off bigtime was a) the huge text and b) the way you never capitalized anything after dialog even when it should be. Other than that, great.

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