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  • Morgs19

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    Hope you update soon I love this!
    April 7th, 2017 at 01:41pm
  • Auntiebabs

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    I started reading this only to find out you haven't updated it since 2012. Why? It's very entertaining.
    August 7th, 2013 at 06:13am
  • svanderheide

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    I really wish you would update this story soon
    June 10th, 2013 at 02:11pm
  • NaomiJ

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    I just started reading this story but I really wish it would be updated
    May 31st, 2013 at 04:53am
  • NaomiJ

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    I just started reading this story but I really wish it would be updated
    May 31st, 2013 at 04:53am
  • jazter

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    hopeful bump...
    October 27th, 2012 at 03:27am
  • vany262

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    I miss this story please update soon
    October 19th, 2012 at 07:15pm
  • vany262

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    Please update soon I really like reading this story!
    September 16th, 2012 at 10:56pm
  • chocolateshakegirl

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    PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!! YOU CAN'T JUST STOP HERE! I need updates like Barney needs girls. I need updates like Elmo needs tickles. PLEASE!! :)
    July 22nd, 2012 at 11:16pm
  • Kenarik

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    So maybe she's not so crazy after all... I mean if Captain Oblivious likes her in that way... LOL I really like what you're doing with this, keep it up.
    June 16th, 2012 at 09:53am
  • NMT82

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    Awesome story. I hope you decided to update soon. I am so curious to read what happens.
    June 11th, 2012 at 03:09am
  • koobyloob

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    I have absolutely no idea who Sidney Crosby is, and I don't really follow hockey, but your story is interesting and informative. I'll definitely be reading the whole story just now that I've read the first chapter, I can't bear to not finish the rest.

    I'm a stickler for correct spelling and correct grammar, so that's another reason as to why I'm finishing the story!

    Well done, I'm looking forward to finishing it!
    June 6th, 2012 at 07:32am
  • Before 1975;

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    I am not a fan of hockey. With that said, I loved the story. Your descriptions are excellent. Your main character has an engaging, cutesy feel about her that I find very appealing. Your grammar and spelling were notably polished although I'd suggest considering a few of your word choices. For example, there were a couple instances were you wrote 'did' when 'made' would have sounded better, and things like that. But that's me really being a nitpick. For the most part, I liked this. I don't even like hockey, but I found the story to be interesting and amusing all the same.
    June 5th, 2012 at 10:03pm
  • i'm a happy camper.

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    okay, so. i read the first chapter and suprisingly liked it. i'm not a gigantic fan of hockey but Crosby is just so stunning, and well, sexy- you know. and I'd read anything with him in it. i liked how she was all cute like, "excuse me while i drool all over you during practice cause you're a god, and-"

    yeah, like i said. sexyness.

    i'm going to go back and read the rest of the chapters 'cause i'm curious as to what happens next (:
    June 5th, 2012 at 06:35pm
  • vany262

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    hope you update soon
    June 4th, 2012 at 02:10am
  • RebaXBroda

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    Cant wait to see what happens next, love the chapter!:)
    May 18th, 2012 at 09:45pm
  • hockeychick37

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    UPDATE SOON!!! THIS IS SOOO GOOD!!!
    May 18th, 2012 at 12:24pm
  • megpie12

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    I love this story. keep it up! Cant wait for more. :)
    February 27th, 2012 at 07:32am
  • temptation;

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    EMILY? D:
    My senses are tingling and I already don't like her.
    February 27th, 2012 at 04:14am
  • BecauseItsTheCup

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    I absolutely love this story! Please update soon! And is Emily the girl that Sidney just talked to?

    Now I have to go....I gotta go and subscribe to this story!
    February 27th, 2012 at 03:30am