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  • Unspoken_Lies

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    This is amazing. I'm currently reading the original book 1 and it was confusing at first reading this too but I like it! I'm finished, and so glad I stumbled upon this story!
    Anyway, it's 3 in the morning and I need to sleep. Just thought I'd say how much I love this <3
    I'll def. check out the sequel later ;)
    January 27th, 2013 at 07:53am
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    I'm loving it so far and I think it has a lot of potential too =)
    One thing tho: it all seems so lumped together. New speaker, new line. It makes the work looks so much better and less confusing so it's easier to read =)
    I'll def. keep reading <3
    January 4th, 2013 at 01:26am
  • bubbles103157

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    When is the sequel coming?
    December 4th, 2012 at 11:40pm
  • The Heart's Desire

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    wow this is really good!! Very Happy
    November 10th, 2012 at 03:01am
  • bubbles103157

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    This is probably the best story i've ever read on here. Sequel soon pleaseee!
    November 5th, 2012 at 05:46am
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    @ CheerBabeXHco
    YES! :D
    November 5th, 2012 at 05:28am
  • CheerBabeXHco

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    @ bubbles103157
    Yes, there will be a sequel! I'm actually publishing the final chapter for this story RIGHT now!(:
    November 4th, 2012 at 06:08am
  • bubbles103157

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    I LOVE this story. Is there not going to be a sequel afterall? :(
    November 1st, 2012 at 10:31pm
  • SkaterGirl.

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    Nice to see you updated!
    September 24th, 2012 at 11:11am
  • SkaterGirl.

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    This is a great story
    September 3rd, 2012 at 10:15pm
  • Zaffhi

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    Ahhhhhhhhhhh I loved the update!
    August 30th, 2012 at 01:55am
  • rachelnn

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    I really like this, the only thing I would suggest is more breaks in your writing, making the speech parts have their own lines, its so jumbled and close together its difficult to read fluidly. Other then that I love this plot!
    August 24th, 2012 at 06:59am
  • Newborn.Angel

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    You're seriously an amazing writer. Whenever Stasi's sad, I get sad, whenever she's happy, I'm happy. YOU MADE ME CRY, WOMAN. NO STORIES EVER MAKE ME CRY.

    Anyway, I love it. Update sooooon C:
    August 8th, 2012 at 08:28am
  • SkaterGirl.

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    that was great, I really loved it
    July 31st, 2012 at 11:23pm
  • SkaterGirl.

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    Sweet
    July 25th, 2012 at 07:30pm
  • manda719

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    I'm so addicted to your story keep up the great work!!!
    July 20th, 2012 at 07:29pm
  • SkaterGirl.

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    love it
    July 6th, 2012 at 06:52pm
  • Frankies_Baby_Sis_08

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    write more :) keep it going don't stop. I didn't sleep last night because I wouldn't stop reading it.
    June 16th, 2012 at 08:05pm
  • DarlingBacon

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    I haven't read the books yet, nor have I seen the movie. I really like your writing style. I'm really getting to know the characters easily and I can picture most things in my mind. I like how descriptive you are. Keep up the good work!!
    June 10th, 2012 at 10:58pm
  • SkaterGirl.

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    i'm lovin it. great job.
    May 28th, 2012 at 07:23pm
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