ok so i found this story on comment swap! At first i didn't really understand comment swap, i didn't know i had to write 200+ words. Whoops. :/ but as i was saying, i really love my chemical romance! the first song that attracted me to them was the black parade. genius! but anyways, your story was very heart throbbing and i'll admit that i somewhat cried, for frank's sake. and also, you made everything go together no nicely. you kind of made it look easy, all though it obviously isn't from my past efforts. :/ as of what i could tell you had no typos, which i never can pull off for some reason. and you made me keep wanting more! the only flaw of your story is that it's a one shot, i think you could have lengthened it out more. i'm not a fan of these because i feel as though i get hooked to them, and then i find out it's over! not fair -_- maybe you can recreate the story into something longer? the only reason i read this one-shot was because it was my chemical romance, and it's so sad to say because you write so beautifully. please let me know if you do! any who, as i said before-you have a bright future ahead of you! keep you options open, and never give up! :)
November 28th, 2012 at 06:50pm
