Undercover Lover - Comments

beth1996 (100)

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this story is great, looking forward to more :D

June 22nd, 2013 at 08:28pm

sailorash51 (100)

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I really like this story lol. I cant wait to see whats going to happen in this story, please update soon :D

August 21st, 2012 at 08:16am

PunkyFrenchFry (150)

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:) :) :) can't wait for more! I also have a Reid story :P

February 19th, 2012 at 04:09am

spektor (100)

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Nice. Sorry a wave of childish behavior just washed over me: FIRST! ;P

Anyways, I like it! Good way to start off your story. As for mistakes, I couldn't find any grammatical, structural, or text related confusion. Thank you for using spell checker :).

But, whatever happened with the coffee stained shirt? Not a major element, just a simple curiosity. :)

(I'm sorry if I over-abuse smileys, but gosh darn it! they need love too!.)

Looking forward to some more updates :)

February 12th, 2012 at 04:59am