I think Tom is suppressing some gay feelings there but I still hope he ends up with Storm. Thank God they told Brianna to get lost or I was going to have to shoot her hahaha. excellent!
January 16th, 2012 at 03:43am
Kiss and Control - Comments
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Awwww! they admitted they love each other! I'm so happy! bloody Gordon though he's such a dick! i feel really bad for Nenya and Elladan too.January 16th, 2012 at 03:37am
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Oh my God please don't let Elladan hit Bill! *runs away to read chapter nine*January 16th, 2012 at 03:32am
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loving this! why the hell hasn't anyone else commented! This story is amazing you are a great writer people don't know what they are missing here!January 16th, 2012 at 03:27am
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Wow that was a fantastic chapter! I laughed my ass off when Brianna got pushed off the desk, that interlude between Tom and Nenya was great too, Tom was so embarrassed! Great Work doll!January 16th, 2012 at 03:16am
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Awww Gordon I hate you! he is so horrible to Bill. Elladan is a sweetheart and I really don't like Brianna. I hope Elladan will make Erodin leave Bill alone, Awesome work!January 16th, 2012 at 03:07am
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Erodin is such an ass poor Storm, i hope Tom get's over Brianna and ends up with her, she's really cool.January 16th, 2012 at 03:02am
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woohoo! Bill got some action, his reaction was hilarious, haha loved it!January 16th, 2012 at 02:58am
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Awesome! want to learn more about Elladan, this is interesting.January 16th, 2012 at 02:52am
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I like it so far it's a good start. Poor Bill, people are such dickheads! will be reading the rest. :)January 16th, 2012 at 02:47am