Dreamscape - Comments

I read all three chapters you posted and your story is lovely! I love the detail and the dialogue. I hope you continue

Hey I've read three chapters so far, and you have a really good and original idea going ^^
I like it so far, but could you explain what Eden is exactly >_<

Hey there,
Your story is off to a great start!
It really has the potential to be great.
I've never really seen a story like this on Mibba
So I can't wait to see what you do with this!
Looking forward to your next update.
:)