the story was amazing. i'm excited for what you are going to do next. it's so sad, but so cute. i enjoyed the character development, but can't wait to hear more about vince's dreams and etc. can't wait for the update.
This is a great read! (well, so far.) I just joined and honestly I was having rather a hard time finding an intelligent original story. I like your writing style, and you have a very consistent voice! I like the way you think. Really hope to hear more from you