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  • Filthy Animal

    Filthy Animal (100)

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    Thank you so much :]
    January 18th, 2012 at 03:14am
  • KidsFromYesterday182

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    it seems like a good story so far :]
    January 18th, 2012 at 02:43am
  • Filthy Animal

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    Thank you! I love when I can make people feel something through my writing! Biggest goal I want to accomplish
    January 18th, 2012 at 12:09am
  • marthuhhmayday

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    "I watched him leave with a tinge of guilt in my stomach. Or was it just the coffee? Could I have said more or spoke less, let him have a chance to say how he felt? Who am I kidding; guys don’t talk about things like that. If anything, Caleb seemed like it was painful to even be there.
    Grabbing my coffee, I headed for the door. It took a lot of guts for me to say anything to him and he just shrugged it off like it was absolutely nothing. Maybe I just spent the whole year over-thinking things myself. That was the last time I ever tried to apologize to someone. "

    For some reason, these last two paragraphs are my favorite out of this chapter :]
    They leave me with this like, gut-punched feeling in my stomach
    IT'S AWESOME
    January 18th, 2012 at 12:07am