Asphyxiate Me. - Comments

Wow. That was good, that was really good. And I learned something, too...*wink*

Wow it was awesome and totally hot *.* You knew what was happening, but it wasn't described like and now someone did that, then blah blah blah and later blah blah blah, but the style of writing was like rough like the sex C: These repeated words were making it more intense, it really felt like I was inside this person's head, I could imagine it while I was reading it... Truly awesome, and the shortness only added to its greatness C: wow...
Ps. What paring you had in mind? C:

I definitely had a pairing a person in mind as I wrote this, but make it what you will and let me know. This is really rough and was written on about twenty minutes.

xoxox
-Dru