Typical Annie - Comments

Hi, I’m here from comment swap.  Right away I just wanted to say that I went into your story not knowing anything about it or who it was about. That being said, as soon as I saw your banner, I screamed-I love The Summer Set, haha. I’m a huge The Summer Set fan, but can never seem to find any of Summer Set fan fiction here, or any good kind. Yours was an exception, and I really liked your story! Ok, I’m done know fangirling over The Summer Set, sorry haha. Onto your actual story, your story was really good.  It flowed really easily, and there were no big grammar or punction mistakes or anything else like that. Everything seemed really realistic-from what the people would say and the dialogue, and everything was just really good. I also liked your title- and how it fit with the story, as they kept saying that. As someone said, it reminded me of ICarly, and I thought it was really cute and I really liked it. I was said it was only a one-shot, as you’re a very talented writer, and I will definetly read whatever you put out in the future.

Ugh, I hate it when this happens. Lol. I was brought here by comment swap and I have absolutely no idea who this is about. BUT, I read it, though. :)

I kinda got a bit giggly when I saw the chapter title was "You've never been kissed?" I have no idea why, but I just found it really cute.

The fact that Annie gave Terrance his first kiss was just adorable. It reminded me of iCarly, when Sam outed the fact that Freddie had never been kissed to everyone on the web show. It was a downer at first, but then she revealed she'd never been kissed either, so they kissed each other. :3 Of course, this is totally different since Annie is obviously a bit more...experienced?...then Sam. But the cuteness is all the same. I really enjoyed Annie and how you portrayed her, and overall I like this a lot. ^_^.

Even though I have absolutely no idea who this fanfic is based around, I read every single last word of it. I really enjoyed reading it, actually.

I found it extremely adorable when Annie gave Terrance his first kiss so that he wouldn't feel so bad and so his friends wouldn't be able to take the piss out of him - It was a cute act of selflessness which I loved!

Would it be wrong of me to admit that I love the promiscuity of Annie - how she seems like she's ever curious to test out who kisses best and who she likes to kiss best, haha. I love it!

Keep up the good work with your other work, I really enjoyed reading this :)

As always, I thought the piece was incredibly cute. I love how it evolved from the beginning just being about a guy receiving his first kiss from a rather promiscuous girl to being about a clandestine relationship between two friends, all the while fleshing out Annie as a character.

Of course, the grammar was spot on, this flowed amazingly, and the dialogue between the characters was very realistic. The only issue I would say that I had with it was sort of along the lines of the other stories that I've commented on in that I have no clue who The Summer Set is, and there are numerous characters introduced in the beginning of the piece that I couldn't really keep track of. It just felt like a little too-much-too-soon.

Awwwwwww this is pretty cute! The beginning is very sudden, just kind of throwing you right into the story, but it's pretty interesting. I look forward to seeing where you will take this story. I hope that you update soon! I'm a sucker for love stories, so I'm excited to see what will happen next!! Good luck with your writing and update soon please!!! :-p

This is wonderful. Your grammar is impeccable, and the characters were fleshed out; rather than being one-dimensional.

I really enjoyed reading this. I love The Summer Set, so I was happy to see that someone finally wrote a new fan fiction with them in it. I really love your descriptive details and how amazing your style of writing is.

This was really lovely! I am a huge fan of The Summer Set so it was a pleasant surprise to be pointed in the direction of this story! I really love your writing technique and the content of the entire story is just so well polished! Also, it's going to sound weird but your use of punctuation is perfect! I hate a story that isn't well punctuated! Xx