Crawling. - Comments

@ mupp483

Whoops! Yeah, I apologize for that, especially since when I read stories I pick up on little details like that too. Sorry to confuse you! I didn't even notice it to be honest, and I'm pretty sure I wrote this story over a somewhat long period of time so I must have forgotten about mentioning that at the beginning.

Just a thought... In the first chapter Josh admits he's "had a lot of sex with his drummer" (love the Flintceschi btw) but then in chapter 6 he says he hadn't ever had sex with a man. Am I stupid and misunderstanding things or what? :) Love the story so far!

That ending was, interesting. Haha looking forward to the sequel :)

My friend just suggested this story to me! I'm only on chapter ten, but I love it. I'm going to go finish it now! :)

I'd read a sequel xD I love this story =D

I've just finished reading the whole thing. Damn I like this so far! Can't wait for more! Poor joshy :( john is such an asshole sometimes :/

^i'm sorry about that. I thought based on the way i ended the previous chapter would have indicated that the next chapter would be in john's point of view. Also the last couple chapters have been in john's point of view but i can see why you got confused. I should have put john's name somewhere in that chapter. I'll be sure to make it easier to understand in the future.

I really love this story... But in the last chapter I had noooo idea who was telling the story. Do you think you could try to include that, or put whose POV it the title or something?

Oh God loool. Nice story, tho. Keep updating pleaaaaaseeee.

Idk but I really like this story.
I keep checking almost every hour to see if you've updated D:
<3 <3 <3

oh.
my little josh.
ugh. i'm sad now.

So emotional, whoaaaaa!

I really love your frequent updates! Keep it up pleaseee!!!???

Just subscribed :D I really like this story.
Please update soon, I really want to know what happens to John D:

They are so cute, oh my god!

I thought this pairing would creep me out but I love it! Xx

Cute cute cute <3
I am liking this!

Aww. This is so cute!
I read all the chapters you have up and it's really very good.
I've never read a josh/John fanfic before, but I like this :3
You wrote the sex perfectly, m'dear. ;)
I hope John doesn't decide to act like the sex meant nothing.
Update soon? :)

I like this story so far- I haven't seen any Josh/John stories, either haha(: Ohh and in the first chapter, I thought it was in John's point of view, so I though you were talking about Pat being gay. I seriously considered it for a moment x). But yeah Dan. Anyway, I like this story so you should seriously continue it(: