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  • xXGreyWingsXx

    xXGreyWingsXx (850)

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    I loved your use of repetition; it showed that your consciousness isn't quite the same when you're dreaming.
    And the moral conflict/ self belief sub plot was pretty awesome.
    Plus, the slightly childish language (including the repetition) helped me see how underneath everything we're still children.
    Ok, that's kinda philosophical.
    But nice job!
    March 1st, 2009 at 04:29pm
  • timothy mctague.

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    That is amazing. You are an amazing writer.
    I actually love what you wrote.
    April 13th, 2008 at 09:37am
  • the celestial teapot

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    This is absolutely gorgeous. You're an amazing writer.

    This is the one I made my mom read, and she totally agrees.
    April 3rd, 2008 at 06:35pm
  • we are galaxies.

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    keep the faith.
    we will get our dreams.
    March 18th, 2008 at 05:01pm
  • Flynn Rider

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    Yes

    I do believe
    March 18th, 2008 at 02:41pm
  • XoX-loser-XoX

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    wow. Clap Cry Clap
    March 18th, 2008 at 08:49am
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