Dark Savior - Comments

i just finished reading this and i loved it and i cant wait to read more of it either

I sat here and read all of your chapters, the last one made me FREAK!!!!!!! omg! please update!!!!

I really like it! Aww Gena was really sweet and it's good that Lily actually behaved. I found it funny when Gena tried to get their attention and they didn't notice her so she threw keys at him lol. I also found it funny that Matt didn't even notice them and I laughed when his mouth dropped open and Zacky told him to close his mouth before a bug goes in there lmao. I can't wait to see the deal so you better update soon. You are such an amazing writer girl. Keep it up! I love you <3

hi i just read this story and it really really good so far! Keep up the great work! :D

aawe wow, she behaved a little bit ;) oh woaah.. what deal?? she can't stay with her family? heheh now i can't wait to find out what the deal is and how she will react :D

Next update!! I wanna know the deal, it has me on edge!!

Love it! I am glad that Matt let her get back in the car because that must have sucked being in the trunk. Ooo a deal huh? I wonder what it is? Too bad she can't stay with her family but she will be with Matt :) Lucky her. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update now!! I love you girl and you just keep on writing away.

Love this story. What is the deal?! Ahh update soon please.

Awww :[ She doesn't get to stay with her family? :[

hahahahah if someone is a bitch in this story i'd say it's Brian... pmsl! but i'd have him any day of the week though ;)
aah noo... Matt... not the trunk! that's just mean... hahahah :P

Awesome job girl I love it! Dang I can't believe Matt put her in the trunk that was a little too far. Omg she almost died luckily Matt saved her. I love this story so much and I can't wait for the next update. Keep those ideas coming!

I'm starting to wonder when and if she's ever going to trust him. it's understandable though. it makes it more realistic.

hahahahah Brian got bitten... so funny XD
Can't blame her, i mean waking up after being drugged, in bed next to Matt and Brian in the bed next to them, i think i'd run too :D
awesome update <3

Great update girlie! Whew tension between Lily and Brian I see haha. Well now they are finally heading back home and I can't wait to see what happens next.

I am enjoying this story. I dunno what was up with her in that last part though o..o

Great update girl. I wish that Matt could have beat all those guys asses but oh well at leas they are finally out of that place now. When you said Princess Gates that made me laugh haha. Yay Brian is here haha. Wow she just started flipping out haha but who could blame her after all she has been through. I hope Matt can make things better for her. I can't wait for the next update. I love this story! Update soon. Love ya <3

oh holy shit! i thought for a moment there that they wouldn't make it out of that hell alive.... O_o
hahahah Brian! aawe no wonder she flipped out, she's been through Hell and back a couple of times... awesome update <3

omfg!!!
my heart breaks for poor Lily!
i was hoping Matt woulda killed at least one of em, the monsters!

I freaking love this!

aawe at least he tried *sniffs* those assholes O_o but they will be on their way out of there soon though!!