The Story Left Untold - Comments

I thought this was really good. I'm glad he convinced her to stay and it ended happily. :D
It didn't have the ending I expected but that ended up being a good thing.
Great job with it. :)

No it was written perfectly. I love this, the song is so emotional and so is the way this is written. I feel as if she doesn't want to marry him though... And then she relunctantly says yes, what's with that? And if he knows she's scared of committing to someone thenwh this... And if she loves him why so distant?

Dude this is perfect. Like this song gives me the emotional rush every tme I listen to it. When I found out that you wrote this story with the inspiration of this song, I was all excited to see what you can come up with. I definitely felt the emotions of heartbreak and decisions. I also love that Alex brought on the memories they had and it somehow made April reconsider her decision. It wasn't that marriage thing that made her stay. He made her reconsider by taking her back to their past and everything they went to. This song is just so heartbreaking and it gets to me every time. Has got to be one of my favorite heartbreaking songs/favorite by EA. & I'm glad that your story is able to stir that emotion in me. Oh, and I totally loved the setting of April trying to sneak off when Alex is asleep.

And kudos to you for including Sebastian and Peyton :) it's like they feel the same heartbreak Alex would feel if he caught her leaving.

So many feelings in my head right now. I think this is excellent!!!