That's A Wrap - Comments

Nossa, como é perfeito esse negócio de tirar fotos nuas de Matt!

FUUUUCK! that was so amazing, by far one of the best matt one shots ive ever seen

psh are you mental? the sex was amazing! totally drool-able. matt was so dominant! i loved it :D
oh man i would love to take nude pictures of matt, haha. i really liked this! i haven't read one where the girl takes naked pictures of the guy. i wonder if it really was for her project, or she just wanted to see him with his kick off. im surprised the camera was big enough hahaha. this was amazing! i enjoyed every moment.

Ohkay, so I really enjoyed the plot for this. It was original and it made me want to keep reading on, which made me very happy, because it takes a lot for my attention to stay in one place while reading fan-fiction.
I liked how Matt was so persistent on not taking nude photos in front of Roxy, and it made me giggle a tiny bit because i could picture her begging on her knees in front of him. I also liked how they were friends with each other but they secretly were totally crushing, but both were too nervous to admit it. It was cute, when Matt walked in all 'oh shit, what do I do?' when he saw the photoshoot area. :)
I couldn't find any spelling mistakes within this, which again, made me a happy camper. I also liked how demanding he came out with "Say my name", because I can see him being a dominant person in bed and that only added to my fantasy. It was great, I loved it. :)
The sex was... to be honest, it was alright for me. It didn't really make me feel anything as I read through it, but that's mainly because I'm picky when it comes to something that has smut in it. It takes a lot for me to be all submissive when I read it. The moans and pants were good, but also they were a bit too... talkative, I believe.
But I liked how Matt was gentle with her afterwards, and took care of her. It made me die a tiny bit inside of happiness. :) This was pretty good, and I enjoyed it. Thank you! :)

I love this. Perfect. Omg probablyy favorite one shot ever

Fucking Fantastic! this story was good enough to eat! you gotta find a way to expand this into a chapter story... i love the plot and the characters! it would defiantly keep my interest! :)

Loved it, like seriously, I'm going to read it again!
I loved the characters and the story, it's fantastic! :D
And I agree, it was hot as hell! Awesome job!

A-FUCKING-MAZING!!! I love this! It was a original plot and it was hot as hell! lol Very nice job sweets! =D <3