November 20th, 2013 at 10:21pm
That's how I feel about Carve, you know? It's my escape from everything and when someone bashes on a character that is an exact replication of you, it hurts worse than saying "I don't care for the plot" because attacking that character is attacking you. Attacking a plot that is as close to home as this is not right and no matter what anyone says, your writing will always be amazing and you will always be my friend. I will always support your writing and your characters because anything short of that is not right.
As for Tason in this chapter, I really love how it was more from his point of view. It gives us readers a glimpse into his mind and I adore it so much :) It's really a great story and I can relate to it. Great job, love :)
I have to say, it's really interesting just how much variety I've been finding through this comment swap thing. Anyway, I read through this story and found myself a bit distant through it all. I'm not overly fond of the lead, or the cast in its entirety for that matter. There's just nothing there that I can relate to. I don't mean this unkindly, this sort of story just didn't happen to be my cup of tea. Although, it also seems you haven't touched on it in a while? And it seems you really hold this story close to you, so I hope you come back and add to it. Writing should be a release, not a chore. Keep up the good work, carry.me.home.!