(excuse my language but) holy shit, this is amazing!! I love this story, and I seriously can't wait for more!!! Update soon...I want to know how the meeting will go!
1. I think someone's got a cwush on somebody:3 2. I fink he wikes her! 3. I think Zack caught her! 4. I dunno c: 5. AAW SHNAP!! SHIT GON GO DOOOOOWWN!! Update soon, gorgeousness!
Lol I can already picture Rian looking at her all big brotherly and what not. I love the tension between her and Zack. It's so realistic... in theory anyway.