All I Want - Comments

** Chapter 4 **
Do you mind if I start with some dialogue? Ok well I'm pretend you said yes, "I know I've had weeks to read chapter but well I'm a pro at procrastinating ha yeah but hey Friends?" (no the TV show I know you thought it) and oh yeah Sorry for well not reading sooner.
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ok so a billiant chapter well written, I have to say I admire this character's mentality (not trying to slip the word mentalist in to this comment at all *face palm*) anyway he really seems a stand up guy but hey what I mean to say is I LOVE THIS STORY WRITE MORE IT'S AMAZING x Ame x

Well ok check list:
Angst YES
Cute YES
Did I love it YES
Full house YaY I love this story most amazing very good so cute stop complaining about how much angst is in it a little angst never hurt any body (ok it probably has but hey I don't know) any way very good cute and just plan great AMAZING love it so xx Ams

Hey xx sorry it took me so long to read this story much less important stuff got i'n the way anyway may I be so bold as to say that was a lovely and most well written story a strong story line defined character and oh my god so angsty it was amazing loved every word cx please post more