Albus Potter and the Return to Hogwarts - Comments

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I'm sorry I don't do Harry Potter, it's not you it's Harry. But I did skim through this and I saw that it was really well written and very descriptive. Needless to say your writing style doesn't make me want to kill myself like some people's fanfics on here. It's actually very good despite the fact that I have no clue who any of these people are.

Hiya I'm from Comment Swap.I like rock music.But just so it is known I'm not a Potterhead,I've seen one movie and that was the chamber of secrets.Anyways I think the moving layout is a bit distracting.I was watching it for a minute before I even glanced at the story.It's a good picture just dont make it move:)

I just remembered Rose Weasley and Albus are related so it's kinda awkward that he likes her..

I just remembered Rose Weasley and Albus are related so it's kinda awkward that he likes her..

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I have ADD so this is probably just me haha, but the layout is distracting from the text. Otherwise everything is really, really, really good. I love it.
I don't usually suscribe to the comment swap stories but I think I'm going to for this one it's so good. Plus I love Harry Potter haha... Amazinggg job.

Ok I've only the chance to read the first chapter at the moment and, to be honest? I already LOVE it ! :) This is the first time that I've come across an ASP fan fic and I just love the idea of seeing his first year at Hogwarts! I think that you've done a very good job setting up the characters and I'm excited to see which houses they all get sorted into :) I'm trying to think of what kind of misadventures they're going to get into and who the villain/s is going to be this time. I definitely enjoyed this so far and I will definitely subscribe and come back and read more when I get the chance. Great job and looking forward to reading more! :)

Hi there!
wildeyedjokers sent me this way. c:

She figured I'd love this story because I'm obsessed with Harry Potter.

I really, really like this story. Your style is amazing. I love the detail you put into it. And I love how cuddly Anna got to Al so quickly. She seems adorable<3

I have one criticism to give you though. :x In the dorms, they're separated by year. There isn't any way that James and Al would be in the same dorm room.

Other than that, everything's fantastic.

I'm looking forward to where you go with this. :)

It has been a while! :D Great update though.
I hope he and Scorp can be mates. And I have a feeling Anna is Neville Longbottom's kid. :D

Very great story!! Can't wait for you to update soon :) I love it!!

I like it, you're writing style is good, though I'm surprised you made it that Albus had never met Hagrid, seeing as it's mentioned in the book that they have tea at his shake, and Albus is 11, so he would have met him.
I like where this can go though :)