Hesitating and Suffocating - Comments

  • daydreamz

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    I miss this story so much.
    August 24th, 2014 at 07:20am
  • hiiamguesswho

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    yes pls finish this story i want to read it but im afraid i would get ruined
    January 24th, 2014 at 11:42pm
  • sadfkjsfj

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    You need to finish this story I am actually crying
    June 29th, 2013 at 08:12pm
  • lovelyhope

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    I understand his point of view a bit better but he still just needs to man up and try to get her back. I just want them together again!
    December 16th, 2012 at 11:34pm
  • AlexAddiction

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    I do understand him a bit better now to points for him!
    December 12th, 2012 at 05:50am
  • QueenOfaScene

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    Well ending this would suck..butttttttttt as long as you continue this a third time I'd deff stick around for the thrilling ride ;)
    November 22nd, 2012 at 08:09am
  • AlexAddiction

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    PLEASEEEE!!! FOR THE LOVE OF GOD! Don't end it! I'm in tears here!
    November 19th, 2012 at 07:35am
  • itsparamshayall

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    i really just hope they get back together :( i want her to remember more things, like everything hahaha john is such an asshole sometimes! :L
    November 17th, 2012 at 10:58pm
  • AlexAddiction

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    PLEASEEEEEE!!!! UPDATE SOON! And me too man I'm in my sophomore year and I got band going on.
    November 17th, 2012 at 05:42am
  • ninaclare

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    Please update soon!! Thanks!
    November 7th, 2012 at 12:04am
  • QueenOfaScene

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    Judging by your last chapter's author note it sounds like you're planning on ending this story soon? Am I right? And you're wanting to know how you should end it...
    Honestly I love this story, so much more than it's prequal because there is so much pain and drama in it than there was in the prequal...it's not all easy and filled with happy moments. I think you should drag it out a little bit longer, let yourself decide how you want it to turn out, surprise us...everybody loves a good surprise whether it's a good or bad one. But like I said I think you should drag it out a little bit longer, see where it goes, after all it feels like the guys and Cally just went on tour, it feels like the story is still so fresh, like not much has gone on between everyone....I feel like it hasn't came to that big climax that happends in every story yet....I really hope you keep it going a little bit longer. You're a wonderful writer, and so very creative, I know you can keep us entertained a little whiles longer if you wanted to.
    September 21st, 2012 at 05:38am
  • becauseiamfree

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    Wow I can't believe they just had that conversation...
    Can't wait for more <3
    September 18th, 2012 at 01:57am
  • lovelyhope

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    I. Hate. John. I still want them to end up together though. I'll be so upset if they don't.
    September 17th, 2012 at 10:16pm
  • sailor of the skies.

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    Okay, so basically all I want is more drama along the lines of where this is going anyway and then eventually for them to get back together...
    anyway, more soon please!!!! I love this story so much!!
    September 17th, 2012 at 02:30am
  • daydreamz

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    Sad :(
    September 17th, 2012 at 12:44am
  • lovelyhope

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    Is John going to apologize to Cally for being such a jerk? And is she going to remember more things? I seriously just want them to get back together.
    September 2nd, 2012 at 10:30pm
  • AlexAddiction

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    YESS! <3 please please update soon!
    August 26th, 2012 at 09:37am
  • Winter

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    This is beautiful!! Update soon!!! :-)
    August 23rd, 2012 at 06:57am
  • sailor of the skies.

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    YESS John kinda sees that he screwed up!!!
    More soon pleasee!!!
    August 22nd, 2012 at 02:21pm
  • ItsLeoBiatch

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    <3
    I love updates!! Haha
    Keep this one going! I need to know what happensss!!!
    August 22nd, 2012 at 08:35am