Smile For Him - Comments

"he was staying with Harry...even if he was fast asleep." And that, is why I love you. My heart literally skipped a beat when I saw you'd updated this. I love you, I love the story, I love Lou and Harry and I want more. Please.

More! Love the story! :)

This is so effing cute! :)

easily one of my favorite stories(:
please update soon?

I literally stayed up all night to read like of these stories. You're very talented. If this was a book, this would definitely be my favorite! Update soon! :)

I'm kind of angry at myself for not commenting on this story yet. I really love how you've written it so far, and I can't wait for more. Haz and Lou's actions always make me smile while reading this. I always relate to how Harry feels, though, minus the evil stepdad part. I think that's why I love it so much, because of how I relate to him and I feel almost like I'm in the story. I truly love it and I can't wait to read the rest of Larry's romance!

i get upset everyday you don't update, but when you do, it completely makes up for it. you really are an amazing writer.

God, I really do love this story.
It's my fave.
skdfjs.

Oh my god. You are amazing. Three chapters all at once. I think I love you.

I really liked the "in the space of an hour Harry Styles became the coolest boy in school. Not that anyone knew." line. It was just perfect, and Harry's so going to be hungover in the morning.

I'm going to reply to your comment here, because I think this needs more comments.

I'm glad I made you smile, this really is adorable and I like that you've included the other boys in it and haven't made it just Lou and Harry. I'm thinking Tobias is going to become extremely important to Harry and something bad's going to happen when Robin finds out about Louis. I just can't see that revelation going over well.

I'm also not quite sure how the reveal to Liam and the other's is going to go over either, I'm not seeing them all being perfectly okay with Harry being seventeen and from that posh school on the other side of town.

However, I can see Louis and Harry being absolutely perfect for each other. Just the fact that Harry's smiling is a good thing. I'm really excited for where you take this and I really love this and I can't wait for an update.

This so wasn't what I was expecting when I started reading - it's a completely different take on Larry Stylinson that I haven't seen before.

I love how you've portrayed Harry and Lou and the worlds in which they live. This is so totally adorable... it's just... wow. Love it.

I always find myself lost in these chapters, they're just so brilliant!

I just read this last chapter over ten times. AHHH! I'm so happy they finally kissed!!! :)

I can't believe I have yet to comment on this story, I thought I had. Well, I may as well start now. It's kind of perfect, it's so wonderfully written and it makes me happy every time you update because it's just a generally lovely story.
I most definitely can't wait to read more of what you have up your sleeve for those two boys.

Oh my God! This! I've never.. Oh wow!

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this is my favorite story, ever. <3

This is the best story I've ever read!
10000000%
Please update soon:)

I am OBSESSED. With this. It's amazing! :)

Love it! :) can't wait to read more!

This is really well written. I love the story :)