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  • MCRLUCY

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    Chapter 2: awesome! Cannot begin to tell you how much I'm in love with this story. I'm well and truly hooked. I love your style of writing. Very Happy
    September 12th, 2012 at 12:33pm
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    Wow! This first chapter is just stunning. Extremely written, plenty of imagery. Really quite emotional. You have a good grasp of grammar and punctuation. Cannot fault this one bit and I'm so looking forward to read more. Very Happy
    September 12th, 2012 at 12:14pm
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