Hopelessly Devoted - Comments

@ Supersonicskyline
Thanks. Unfortunately I've been in writer's block for a couple of years now. ):

i love this story :)

@ angiewhiskeyhands
Ah, I remember now.
He asked her to marry him.
She said no.

Mibba didn't notify me of your message for a month.
I believe I took the outline for this story with me when I moved, so if I did, maybe I'll finish it one day. There were only eight or nine chapters left anyway. (:

@ The Mini Monster
I've read so many stories that I don't even remember what I was refering to.. If you end up finding out, please let me know.. hahaha

@ angiewhiskeyhands
I don't even remember the end to this so I can't really reply. I'll check later.

THE COCK LICKING CUNT SUCKER SAID NO? WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK?!?!?!?!

@ WhoAreYouJudy
I have another Oli story started though, called Bite Your Lip And Fake It.
You should check it out, you might like it. (:

@ The Mini Monster
omg :'DDD

@ WhoAreYouJudy
Nope, I recently found the outline though, so I'll get on that.

YOU NEVER FINISHED THIS!!!!:(((

Awe that was cute!

are you still updating this? not trying to sound bitchy,, just wondering

I'm finding it pretty hard to read this story, just because I really don't like Dallas. I don't mean to be offensive, because I'm sure you've put a lot of effort into creating her and making her this way, but just the way she constantly jumps down Oli's throat, and everything is his fault. I'm only on chapter 7 so I suppose my opinion could change, but I didn't really like her in the prequel either. It's just the way she goes on is mental. I get that she's pregnant and hormones are all over the place, but bloody hell. The whole thing about him not being happy that she didn't tell him she was smoking weed and her reaction just make me dislike her even more. He had every right to be mad, especially with her past involvement in drugs. She was completely out of order reacting the way she did.
By the way, this is how you know you're doing a good job with a story, I'm so wound up, it actually feels like this whole situation is real.

just a quick note that c-sections are also performed when women choose to have their bottom half numbed! so it is plausible.

oh i love it! never had a da but stories like this make up for it all and i think i might cry which makes me sound so freaking lame but i dont care!

One thing that really bothers me about this story is the c-section part. I'm still reading before the baby is here btw. They will not do a c-section unless its absolutely necessary. (Life threatening situations only.) You can't just schedule one on your own whenever you feel like. They only do it if your a high risk pregnancy, have had a c-section before, who have problems with the placenta, whose babies have certain birth defects, whose babies are in the wrong position. Also another reason is your due date might be wrong, because they go by the last day of your last period. It takes any where from 2 to 3 weeks for you egg to became fertile. Therefore, you might not be as far along as you thought, or farther a long than you thought. JS.

I've recently read the prequel & I just caught up. I absolutely love this story, and I'm soo happy the baby is here! I just wanted to cry tears of joy! <3

awww

ANDJDHBCISSKAKLAKDKD THE BABY OMG IM GONNA CRY

Aw the picture of hatchett is adorable!!!!