The Way We Were - Comments

  • angeldkng

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    When I found this story I got so hooked. I am really looking forward to the next segment to see what happens next. Love the story!! :)
    November 6th, 2012 at 01:59pm
  • Dannichappell

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    Noooooooo i don't want them to get a divorce!! Amazing chapter so much emotion!! Update soon!!
    October 15th, 2012 at 10:35pm
  • Dannichappell

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    Another great chapter!! They need to stay together!! Please update soon!!
    September 30th, 2012 at 05:54pm
  • Dannichappell

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    First time i've commented ( Sorry about that) This chapter was amazing! I feel so bad for her! Hope things start picking up for her!! Update soon!!!!
    September 27th, 2012 at 10:08pm
  • Dumb_dumb

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    I still haven't finished reading your entire story, but I think you should know that it's actually pretty dang good. =] One thing I have been noticing is that people of lately have atrocious grammar ( ex: "he seen me at the park thru the window"), and I am counting all of the lucky stars in the sky and thanking them individually because you have good grammar. It's so refreshing and nice to find that. I like your writing style and the way that you format your story, not only in style but in pace. There are times when you need to pace your story and let it flow fairly slowly and other times where your flow needs to be a waterfall. You seem to grasp that. Thank you for posting this!
    August 9th, 2012 at 08:41am
  • Can't Be Tamed.

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    I'm so glad they didn't get married quickly. I can't wait to see what happens next.
    February 28th, 2012 at 07:19am
  • glamourxkills

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    this is SO amazing!
    I am in love with the idea that she is now going to become Lady Gaga!
    ha, could have swore she was going to be Katy Perry
    February 26th, 2012 at 06:28am
  • Can't Be Tamed.

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    I just read the other stories and I love the series. Can't wait for what's next!
    February 16th, 2012 at 10:49pm