Can I just say that this is in all honesty one of the greatest stories I've ever read ?
You really have some major talent in writing, and I admire you so much for it . There's something about the way everything is described that's always so perfect and right and- basically, I love it. So, bottom line, this is fantastic and I can't wait for what's to come ! Amazing job - endless rounds of applause ;) xobryn
No!!!!!! Gosh I'm so upset.... Like I can't even comprehend what my emotions are right now...I don't want her to leave....I hope someone stops her like in those movies where someone saves someone right at the last moment:( This story has me crying more than when i'm watching titanic D: Great though!
You...have...some serious writing skills my friend. I've been up half the night reading all nineteen chapters you have so far because I refused to go to sleep till I finished them.( Thank you. I'm tired as hell now.) lol I've heard of American Horror Story but only because I saw previews of it on tv and it showed Evan Peters(love him) but I've never once watched it, but after reading your fic I'm 100% tempted to check it out. All though I highly doubt the actual show does any justice to your story. Heck I think you probably out did the show itself. Keep it up!:D
You...have...some serious writing skills my friend. I've been up half the night reading all nineteen chapters you have so far because I refused to go to sleep till I finished them.( Thank you. I'm tired as hell now.) lol I've heard of American Horror Story but only because I saw previews of it on tv and it showed Evan Peters(love him) but I've never once watched it, but after reading your fic I'm 100% tempted to check it out. All though I highly doubt the actual show does any justice to your story. Heck I think you probably out did the show itself. Keep it up!:D
It's actually quite scary how easy it is to forgive him. I think he really is crazy, I think he involuntarily tries to control people and people let him because he's just great...even though he's not? Does that make sense? He's so involuntarily powerful, I can't even describe it. Such a fascinating character though.