Dead Heroines - Comments

I really liked how you began with a memory, someone just looking back at something that was said and how deeply it impacted them. To me you've kept this realistic you know, with the whole envious streak one grows for their friends but you realise that somehow their not as perfect as you made them out to be. I could also feel this sense of real closeness between the girls, and how boredom had them do something so immature, yet it led to a statement that could only be understood with maturity. What I really loved was how it drifted from being this casual night in to this life changing moment. You should write more, I'm fascinated. Well done =)

I like this. (:
I love how you started out the story.
You should update, soon!

I really like this so far :) it's kind of unemotional, but hey. It's good :)

Ooh I love it! I adored how you started the chapter with her secret, then worked back up to it by recounting the past(: I could totally relate to a lot of this, it was like picturing one of the countless sleepovers I've had with my friends. And I loved how you described the room, like the lights had "a hipster appeal" xD I have christmas lights in my room for the hipster appeal(: I absolutely loved everything about this!