You've Stolen My Heart - Comments

Here to reveiw ha.
I like it a lot still, You write well which is good.
The plot seems good, Can't wait to see what unfolds. : )

I like it so far.
:)

Huh, The layout and writing was a little hard to read but beside's that I like it for a first chapter.
It seem's like it has a lot to unfold still, I can't wait to see what else happens in the next chapters. Nice job, I like it hon. :)

You need to space between your paragraphs, that's all.
But otherwise, you're doing okay so far.