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  • Ice-Fire

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    Just re-read, and I found a few more mistakes xD...

    Then that feeling that she had when she pulled him out of the bakeshop. - bakeshop or bakery?
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    She shook it off again. “No, it can’t be love. That is impossible I just met this guy,” she tought to herself and trudged on biteing her lip as she wanted to ask more questions. - tought is supposed to be thought... Biteing is supposed to be biting...
    February 5th, 2012 at 02:16am
  • Ice-Fire

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    But other than that dddd(^.^)bbbb extra likesss
    January 28th, 2012 at 10:51pm
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    *FIRST COMMENT! :D *

    Found 1 minuscule mistake at the very beginning of the first chapter you missed a " mark before the first word... then 3 other mistakes.. you can search for where they are but:

    He was waering an over shirt that was unbuttoned. ---wearing not waering
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    I followed her sent here ---scent not sent
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    She unlocked the door and then she laied down on the couch. ---laid not laied
    January 28th, 2012 at 10:50pm
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