That was such a cute, sweet chapter, I loved it! I love how sweet Giselle is and how much Kris and Brenna are in love, they are such an awesome couple. And I had to LOL when I saw Giselle had gone with Max, the Superstar is quite the charmer
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE pretty please with Kris Letang on top :) I'm totally in love with this story and I might die if you don't update soon. How could you leave me hanging with that confession?!
Comment Swap brought me here and well I really enjoy this story. I rarely ever read fics like this but I think this is well written. There are a few grammatical errors and a few parts are kinda unclear but other than that I think you should keep writing because I want to find out what happens next :)
I just finished the first chapter and I thought I might like to point out a thing or two; There is one gigantic paragraph that could be split up into another paragraph or two. also this sentence confused me a little 'After reading over everything she had in the folder, Kris then it on the desk and looked up at her. ' Did you mean to add a 'threw' to it? also, I noticed that you seem to add a space between " and the word. The charterers and the plot are interesting though. I cant wait for more!