Breaking Hearts Has Never Looked So Cool - Comments

@ Shell Carlile
Oh, I understand completely what it's like to be in a rush and have a mouse pad decide to just not do its job.

@ CallusedSilk
I was rushed and I was using my mums laptop and the mouse pad on her laptop stop going. And thank you

You posted a sequel, so I'm going to go through and read this and give you my opinion. I'll give it periodically, but I will first and foremost say that the title of the story is pretty awesome.

However, I'm currently laughing more than I should be because the status is still 'Active will post squeal soon'. Partially 'cause it still claims to be active, but mostly because you wrote 'sequel' as 'squeal'.

I really like this story so far. You do have a few minor grammatical issues, but it doesn't interfere much with the story. Keep writing please! =)