The Kidnapping - Comments

Marissa.Motionless (100)

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You are improving :) There is a lot less I said, he said, Johnny said blah blah blah. Great job! hey, hey guess what? Proud of you:)

February 29th, 2012 at 02:30am

Marissa.Motionless (100)

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I agree with llovea7x. Your going to fast and skipping a lot of things, I think you liked my story Four More Day's TOO much. In your chapter Zackys turn you called Scarlet Cassidy.

January 31st, 2012 at 01:03am

Ilovea7x (100)

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slow the story down a tad bit.

January 30th, 2012 at 11:51pm

zandria (100)

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more to come

January 25th, 2012 at 11:05pm

zandria (100)

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thanks

January 25th, 2012 at 11:05pm

Ilovea7x (100)

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I love it so far.

January 25th, 2012 at 10:48pm